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Always ahead,
Never behind,
Looking back
Rather benign.

A step too far,
A path never taken,
Never looking down -
A world yet to awaken.

Hand in hand,
Always a blunder,
Even without sight
It’s still a wonder.

Leaning forward,
Nothing to lose,
Letting it go -
You choose!
©2005-2008 ~witty-cynicism
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Just something I came up with...
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~inmyroom:iconinmyroom: Mar 1, 2005, 8:00:14 AM
i like it, it flows really well
~amliebtam4ever:iconamliebtam4ever: Mar 1, 2005, 8:26:00 AM
nice work Gee.......

do i need to worry about you???


:hug:
~witty-cynicism:iconwitty-cynicism: Mar 1, 2005, 9:50:45 AM
Thank you.:blushes: It's my first attempt to express myself on this website.

Please feel free to criticize it as I'm trying to do better. Just throw in your two cents...:twocents:

:)

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"Life is nothing but a competition to be the criminal rather than the victim" -Bertrand Russel
~witty-cynicism:iconwitty-cynicism: Mar 1, 2005, 10:02:41 AM
Meh. When I know you'll know. :)

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"Life is nothing but a competition to be the criminal rather than the victim" -Bertrand Russel
~amliebtam4ever:iconamliebtam4ever: Mar 1, 2005, 5:58:45 PM
ok then...
ill be watching you *throws an eye at you*
~witty-cynicism:iconwitty-cynicism: Mar 1, 2005, 8:12:54 PM
Ok. :pills:

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"Life is nothing but a competition to be the criminal rather than the victim" -Bertrand Russel